Little things can have a big impact. In daily communications, specific words choices can shape the impression you make on others. Whether by email or phone, at a meeting or in a presentation, what you say (and how you say it) influences the strength of your message.
Communication is weakened when it's riddled with qualifiers and fillers, which undermine credibility, confidence and authority. They can also unintentionally cause the writer or speaker to sound uncertain and insecure.
Consider the following:
Sorry to bother you, but I’m just touching base to follow up on the proposal I sent last week.
I’m wondering if you had a chance to review it yet and possibly have any questions?
Does this sound familiar? While the example is slightly exaggerated, professionals at every level – from interns up to C-suite executives – often adopt an overly passive tone when asking a question or making a request. What starts off as a simple inquiry gets muddled by words and phrases that dilute the message and diminish its impact.
In contrast, consider a more concise and confident version of the same query:
Do you have any questions about the proposal I sent last week?
These are often used to disarm or reduce intensity of dialogue, especially when presenting an opposing point of view. While you should apologize for actual wrongdoings, don’t say you’re sorry simply for communicating; it’s undue and puts you in a belittled position.
Avoid diminishing the importance of a request (or follow-up) by qualifying it as an interruption. Doing so sets you up to be ignored or dismissed, whereas stating a request confidently conveys that it matters (and that you do too).
A vestige of '90s Valley Girl-speak, people of all ages still insert “like” in the wrong places when speaking. This, like, automatically distracts from and dilutes, like, what you’re saying in, like, conversation!
“Just” pollutes emails daily, clouding clarity and reducing the impact of statements. Brevity in writing is desirable; if a sentence reads fine without “just,” it’s just not necessary.
This is another way of saying that you don’t want to be held responsible if what you're about to say is wrong or untrue. Instead, get facts straight first, so when offering an opinion/recommendation/observation, you respond confidently.
While often innocuous filler (akin to um, ah, well -- which are best omitted too), starting off statements this way makes them less effective and persuasive. They can also imply that you’re uncertain or hesitant to take ownership of an idea. While "I feel like..." has worked its way into everyday casual conversation, it doesn't belong in business.
Whether in conversation or giving a presentation, periodically asking others if they follow what you’re saying is appropriate. However, habitually tacking on confirmation questions can signal insecurity, detract from messaging and annoy the people to whom you're speaking. Instead, pause to ask if anyone has questions or wants clarification. This shows that you're invested in their understanding, not seeking superficial affirmation.
If you required surgery, would you want to see the doctor who kind of specializes in your condition or the doctor who specializes in your condition? Whether you’re introducing yourself, talking about your expertise, describing your company or something else, avoid using wishy-washy qualifiers when you want to communicate a definitive message.
While these words all have a real purpose (and if you’re involved in research and modeling/forecasting, you may use them a lot), too often they stand in for “maybe” in situations that warrant firm answers or commitments.
"If you will allow me to say/write this," or the familiar condensed version, "If you will," is a way of seeking permission for an unexpected or unclear word/phrase choice. Regularly hedging communication with this is distracting -- and chances are, it's unnecessary in the first place. While occasionally prefacing a statement with this to imply for lack of a better term may be warranted, whenever possible, it's best to strive for clarity from the start.
Most of us have been guilty at some point of using fillers, qualifiers and hedge phrases, or other diminishing language, to varying degrees. While a stray insertion here or there won't derail the effectiveness of your communications entirely, if you know you’re an offender, carefully review emails and think before speaking to sharpen messaging.
Stronger communications drive persuasiveness and impact, which are positive reflections of your personal brand.